SK Brooklynn Rage

In the original photo, Sakky has most of her weight on her left (our right) foot. In your drawing, the weight seems to be more evenly distributed between both feet. Note how Sakky is leaning forward slightly and how her body curves almost like an exaggerated right parenthesis. The left leg of your drawing is mostly straight; Sakky's left leg is slightly curving in so that her left hip points out. The distribution of Sakky's weight and the way her body is curving helps show that she is swinging the sword and moving to her left. Your drawing shows this a little bit, but is closer to standing up straight. It might help to try and picture the way Sakky's spine is curving. Not a bad sketch overall. I think the proportions are pretty good.